Here's the link to my rough draft.
I confess that I cut down on one word to make it 1500!
Elvis
Here's the link to my rough draft.
I confess that I cut down on one word to make it 1500!
Elvis
Elvis Joseph
Mr. Leake
English 105
Revolutionary Literacy
We are changing. Stopping the relentless pull of time is impossible, but what we can do is see how we have changed during that period. We can look back into ancient days when man began putting down ideas and see the reactions society had to that new idea. Another one of these few literary inspiration is seen at the time of the Gutenberg’s printing press. Here we can examine people’s reaction to the change in writing and reading habits and we can compare that to our own (Carr).
Now we are at another one of these focal points of change where we can draw upon past human experiences and see how the future may turn out. Now is the age of quick, accessible information – where people can stop remembering information because they can find what they need without any hassle.
Various opinions have been made on how the internet is changing us and especially how it changes the way we think. Some of these opinions come from some notable writers such as Clive Thompson, Chris Hedges and Nicholas Carr. Carr tells of how the internet has totally transformed humans, and we have yet to realize it. “What if I do so much reading on the web not so much because the way I read has changed, i.e. I’m just seeking convenience, but because the way I THINK has changed” (Carr). In this simple statement, Carr summarizes his entire article and at the same time, expresses a profound concept and way of looking at this situation. Carr argues that humans are inevitably “not only what we read. We are how we read” (Carr).
Carr argues that the new web age has brought about a transformation not just in how we collect information, but also in how we read the material presented to us. Carr says that now we just “zip along the surface like a guy on a jet ski”. This quote effectively captures Carr’s point – we just “bounce” from webpage to webpage, lacking the patient to read anything in depth at all, while not thoroughly reading anything. This has apparently changed the way and the pace at which we absorb information and thus the way we think. Carr then goes onto to mention previous literary landmarks such as the invention and popularization of writing and the easy availability of books being made – both of which were frowned upon but ultimately ended up being the giant that the dwarf sat on to be taller than the giant (Carr).
I’ve seen the proof of Carr’s opinion in my own life. Before summer break, I usually spent my free time just cooped up near the fireplace, soaking up a good fantasy book – not browsing through social networking sites. Then when school was done, I put down the books and delved into the intricacies of the web (particularly facebook). This, I led myself to believe, was a radical change in myself, something I was proud of. That was until school started again and I brought the Devil’s Highway with the intent of immersing myself in it. It turned out that I couldn’t last 3 pages without either falling asleep or changing my facebook status.
Frantically, I ditched the new book for one of my long-time favorites - The Lord of the Rings. I can only describe the feeling as true horror as I learnt that I couldn’t read anymore. After the first few paragraphs, I would unintentionally start to skim and before long I would give up on my reading. That was about when I was brought Carr’s article as an assignment. I admit that even though I found the subject very interesting and pertaining to my situation, I skimmed the last few pages. In my own way, I’ve proven that what Carr talks about – the change in the way we think – is true and come to realize and accept this truth. I’ll confess that I changed my facebook status to “I HAVE TO DO THIS OR I WILL DIE” just as I was about to get this paragraph finished.
Chris Hedges, in his article Bad Days for Newsrooms—and Democracy, is overly pessimistic about the
Hedges goes on to say that the Internet cannot take up the mantle of newspapers mainly because the internet is made for browsing not reading and according to Hedges, it shows. People spend much less time on newspaper sites than they do on newspaper themselves. Because of this, Hedges thinks that these days are bad days for newsrooms (Hedges).
William Badke follows Hedges line of thought. He too believes that the internet had degraded our critical thinking and research capability. Badke writes, “Encountering the library's information environment is like facing raging beast after raging beast until you pathetically retreat to the info desk, forced to explain your ignorance and raw fear to a stranger”(Badke). Badke uses this sentence to show the ignorance and lack of use of libraries by the youth today who instead use Google for all research if possible.
Badke then goes on to show how the “older” generation today has failed the younger generation. He says that his generation has “failed to explain to this generation what kind of information they were dealing with when they threw words into Google's search box. They were not terribly familiar with the mechanisms that were in place earlier to achieve quality control and to determine what could be viewed as scholarly, or even reliable, information. They had no means to distinguish the essential difference between traditional publications and the average website” (Badke). Badke then cuts down to the heart of the matter saying that there is a breakdown of knowledge and a sudden increase in inadequate research because students nowadays prefer using any website off Google over the scholarly paper written by the seasoned university professor.
As if to shed a positive light on this discussion, Clive Thompson’s article brings about it not just solid facts but hope for a better future. Thompson quotes, Andrea Lunsford, a professor of writing and rhetoric at
In my opinion, the readers and writers of today are much different from those that lived a generation ago. We rely much more on the web than we thought and our dependence maybe our greatest achievement or our greatest undoing. We are becoming more impatient as both writers and readers and this is becoming readily apparent in our blog posts and in our inability to read from un-condensed passages. However, I think that there is a huge advantage here that isn’t readily visible. An advantage that may lead us into writing and reading into a whole new, radical way that is very benefiting to literacy as a whole (along with Thompson’s point). Even though a lot of people such as Badke, Carr and Hedges may not see the different and better path that writing and reading on the blog will show that helps literacy as a whole, I believe that there is benefit, like the benefits of previous literary landmarks that were put down at their time.
In my opinion, this new form of reading and writing (brought on with the dawn of the internet) is our greatest achievement, because in just the same way humans put thoughts into writing and made published writing more available through the Gutenberg’s printing press, we are now making our own great literary landmark – writing and reading on the internet – even though it may have its own short-term disadvantages the same way other literary landmarks had.
Badke, William. "How We Failed the Net Generation." Online 33.4 (July 2009): 47. MasterFILE Premier. EBSCO. [Library name], [City], [State abbreviation].
Carr, Nicholas. "Is Google Making Us Stupid?." Atlantic Aug 2008.
Hedges, Chris. "Bad Days for Newsrooms—and Democracy."
Thompson, Clive. "Clive Thompson on the New Literacy."
Harris, in his book, is very detailed about how reading and writing is defined. Harris writes that the best approach to reading from his view is to first look at the aims (What is the writer trying to achieve? What position does he or she want to argue? What issues or problems does he or she explore?). Then look at the methods (How does a writer relate examples to ideas? How does he or she connect one claim to the next, build a sense of continuity and flow?). And finally the reader has to look at the material itself (Where does the writer go or examples and evidence? What texts are quoted and discussed? What experiences or events are described?), after actually going through what the author is saying in the text.
Harris writes that that the main purpose of writing is the “chance to engage with and rewrite the work of other thinkers” since all writing is basically adding upon to another person’s literary work. That’s the purpose of writing. Next, comes how writing should actually take place. He writes that one good way of coming to terms with a text would be to make a list of the key terms and concepts and then define them if your own words. Harris says writing is all about not just “re-presenting a text but incorporating it into your own project as a writer”, so that you need not only explain what you think it means but also to say something from the perspective from which you read the text. So, the writer will say much about who they are as a writer and about their own interests and values. Harris further breaks down the process of coming to a text with another writer by looking and some moves. Firstly, you have to define the project of the writer in your own terms and make it part of your own prose. Then, you have to note keywords or passages in the text and then assess the uses and limits of this approach.
Both Sullivan’s and Harris’ writing define writing in their own separate ways which can be condensed to form a theory of blogging as writing. Sullivan blogs mainly because it is spontaneous and without any editing which enables him to write down feelings and interests about something on the spot – something which normal writing can not do. What both Sullivan and Harris do when worked together is point out that even though writing should be highly organized and analyzed, writing can include the sending and receiving of personal and instant emotions and feelings along with events on a whim – something which is blogging.
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Shock and caw: Pesky starlings still overwhelm - Yahoo! News
I visited the site to keep up with the News. Read news about those pesky little birds that haunt the U.S and the origins of Labor Day.
neurosugreons getting sued - Yahoo! Search Results
I visited this site to prove to my brother that neurosurgeons do get sued.
Gmail - Inbox (1) - elvisjoseph91@gmail.com
I checked my mail and got a free $10 Amazon gift card from
8 Fast-Growing, High-Paying Jobs
Michael Jackson News - Yahoo! Music
Space Sights and Smells Surprise Rookie Astronauts - Yahoo! News
I visited these sites just because it was interesting (space has a smell, Michael Jackson’s glove sold for $48,400 and plumbing is now considered to be a fast-growing and a high paying job).
Welcome to Facebook! | Facebook
Again, I went to Facebook just to see if anything new was going on.
Welcome to Facebook! | Facebook
Again, I went to Facebook just to see if anything new was going on.
HP Home & Home Office Store — free shipping details
HP® Official Store — Buy an HP Laser Mobile Mouse (FQ983AA#ABA) from HP
HP® Official Store — Buy Mice and keyboards direct from HP
HP® Official Store — Buy an HP USB 3-Button Optical Mouse (KY619AA#ABA) direct from HP
HP® Official Store — Buy Computer accessories direct from HP
HP® Official Store — Buy Gaming accessories direct from HP
I went to HP’s site to find a good mouse to buy.
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I checked my Gmail mail – lots of labor day sales!
17-year-old American upsets Sharapova at US Open - Yahoo! News
Demand for electricity sputters and bills may fall - Yahoo! News
I went to Yahoo to look at some interesting news (electricity bills may fall since demand is down and a 17 year old beats Sharapova at US Open.)
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Memory upgrades from Crucial.com - Determine My Memory Needs
Memory upgrades from Crucial.com - Determine My Memory Needs
Memory upgrades from Crucial.com - Determine My Memory Needs
Memory upgrades from Crucial.com - Determine My Memory Needs
I wanted a better RAM for my 10 year old PC so I went to this site to see how much my ancient PC can handle.
Playstation 1 and Playstation 2 Compatibility
I went to this site to get some info about compatibility issues between PS1 and PS2. Just might buy a PS2 for the first time!
What kind of ram does my computer use? - Yahoo! Answers
yahoo answers what kind of RAM for my computer - Google Search
New Computer Memory RAM Finder Tool Helps Consumers Find The Correct Memory for Computer Model
I wanted a better RAM for my 10 year old PC so I went to this site to see how much my ancient PC can handle.
Age of Empires III - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Age of Empires III: The Asian Dynasties - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
wikipedia age of empires 3 - Google Search
wikipedia age of empires 4 - Google Search
wikipedia age of empires 3 - Google Search
Excellent Games (Age of Empires)! I am thinking of getting the third one.
Man who called 911 charged with mobile home deaths - Yahoo! News
Study: A "properly" calibrated HDTV = cheaper energy bills : Ben Patterson : Yahoo! Tech
I browsed really fast threw some interesting Yahoo News (Calibrate your HDTV folks).
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I checked my Uofl GroupWise Email.
T-mobile vs at&t - Google Search
T-Mobile vs. AT&T Wireless/Cingular - T-Mobile Talk - Mobiledia
T-mobile vs att - Google Search
T mobile vs ATT? - Yahoo! Answers
I’m thinking of getting an at&t service – seems to be somewhat better.
Age of Empires III: The Asian Dynasties - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Age of Empires II: The Age of Kings - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Age of Empires - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Age of Empires III - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Read about some excellent Games (Age of Empires)! I am thinking of getting the third one.
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Browsed really fast through some Yahoo news (I like free stuff)
Welcome to Facebook! | Facebook
Facebook is my life. Go through more of my internet log and you’ll see more of this coming up.
In Sullivan’s article “Why I Blog”, he gives many reasons for the value of blogging as a form of writing. He puts down both advantages and disadvantages of blogging clearly. Sullivan shows the negative side of blogging in detail. He writes, “No columnist or reporter or novelist will have his minute shifts or constant small contradictions exposed as mercilessly as a blogger’s are. A columnist can ignore or duck a subject less noticeably than a blogger committing thoughts to pixels several times a day.” He explains more of how every word of a blogger’s is dissected – even more than how an editor corrects a novel or a newspaper. Sullivan also talks about the negative side seen when bloggers publish posts that were done in a fit of rage and instantly regret doing something like that.
However, in spite of these and more negative aspects to blogging, Andrew Sullivan promotes blogging will all heart. He gives many reasons for doing so. He says that blogging a form of writing like no other. He emphasizes that blogging “is the spontaneous expression of instant thought” – something no edited newspaper or magazine can express. He says that blogging is “more free-form, more accident-prone, less formal, more alive. It is, in many ways, writing out loud”. Now, even though this written expression of thoughts and feelings lacks what a newspaper can give (a completely validated, objective view of events – something someone can trust as soon as they read it), Sullivan argues that blogging gives a reader something more – the instant feelings associated by the blogger (and any normal human) to specific events.
This is the crux of why Sullivan says he blogs. A blog can be extremely personal and yet give an accurate view of events – a view not seen in any other form of writing. For example, Sullivan writes, “On my blog, my readers and I experienced 9/11 together, in real time. I can look back and see not just how I responded to the event, but how I responded to it at
This is why Sullivan blogs. To receive and send personal and instant emotions and feelings along with events on a whim – without someone removing everything except the event – something that makes blogging a unique, revolutionary and great form of writing.